100 WC Week #13



The Hunt


It was a eerie night in the jungle of Africa. I was attempting to find food with my stone spear.
I spotted a tiger cub as I poked my spear into it. A big angry tiger came running at me with full speed the tiger was blocking our escape wait no there's only me. "ROAR!" yelled the tiger as I shook of fear I threw my spear to the tiger and missed and dodged the tiger from completely eating me I grabbed my spear and I threw it at the tiger. I ran home with food to eat.

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  1. Unknown8 December 2017 at 21:06

    Be sure to read it out loud as you have some runon sentence and incomplete sentences.

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  2. Unknown9 December 2017 at 11:50

    Good job

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