100 WC Week #17

 


           
                                        The Red Snake
I cycled on my bicycle in the woods as I come across a red terrifying snake! It was blocking my entrance to the new year countdown. It hissed at me as soon as I took out my phone I looked at my phones clock, just so I can get home not being late. Distracted, the snake swiftly bit me I could feel the poison rushing through my veins. I called 911 before fainting in defeat" Are you ok,are you ok!" the second time it sounded more serious. I woke up in the hospital not remembering anything that happened.

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  1. Unknown26 January 2018 at 15:01

    Your sentences are getting much better. It looks like you have taken time to check over your work.

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