100 WC Week #22





                                                                 The Majestic Goldfish


One day I woke up as fast as i could and rushed to my tree house I climbed up the brown wooden ladder and slowly peered through the window hoping to find something majestic and as a shine in the air I stared at the exact spot. It was a goldfish! And it was flying! I wiped my tears of joy off my face and as soon as I looked back the goldfish was gone and at that moment my thoughts slowly flew out of mind. And on this present day I still remain looking for that fish.

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  1. Gill E3 March 2018 at 00:04

    Very well written! Sentences are clear, great choice of words.

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