100 WC Week #6



                                                                     The Pulling Pond

                                     I saw a mysterious looking pond full of debris .I ran so quick to get away and I bumped into the laboratory I told the scientist" I spotted a mysterious looking pond" we will look at it" said the scientist and the scientist came outside to look at it .It was gone" b.. b.. but I saw it then one scientist said" kid stop hallucinating" .The next morning I ran back to the pond it was there again I placed my hands in the pond .I got pulled in I yelled" help !"No one heard me I randomly got pulled by a policeman.

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  1. Unknown18 October 2017 at 11:27

    You have used some powerful language in your writing such as mysterious, debris, and hallucinating. You have also checked that the spelling is correct for these words. Great job. Be sure to read your writing out loud to a peer. They can help you with editing your work. Use quotation marks when someone is speaking.

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