100WC Week #8




                                                         The Best Day Ever



    Tomorrow was the best day ever! It was christmas! We were gonna discover who the true santa is. We have sleep over so we can all see santa together.
"Goodnight guys!"
"Goodnight" we said
at 12:00 PM we heard creaking floor we whispered could this be santa. We were swimming towards the stairs. It was santa! With the white beard we celebrated quietly. Flame lit the light for us to see him nice and clear we went back to sleep. We woke up all of us were so happy.

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  1. Unknown4 November 2017 at 11:12

    A very creative idea for a story. Nobody thought to use Santa this week. Be sure to read over your writing out loud, to a parent, and to a friend. What do you mean by swimming towards the stairs?Don't forget a capital to start your sentences.

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